Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Any feedback on the beginning of my story?

It's fine, though I might start with your last sentence to grab the reader the page is short enough that they'll stick around to get to the 'grabber'. Can this page be improved? Certainly, but don't worry about that now. Write your story, finish your story, then return to the beginning to work on your rewrites. It'll get better with each one.

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